Old Poem. " Field of memories" (3rd poem I ever wr

[11dreamwalker11 (deleted)]

I must have wrote this about 6 or 7 years ago. it's one of my favorites that I wrote way back then. not quite as good as the previous poem posted here in the Off topic forum, but, thought I'd add something for the sake of breaking the silence in these forums. And a poem seems like an ok idea.
( I slightly modified a few things after i had written it so it didn't suck as much. but, it's roughly the same as it was when I 1st wrote it.)

Field of Memories

Through the fields of memories
upon the hills and cliffs,
I walk through wilted Orchids
and breath what once was crisp

the air around me now grows stail,
the sky above sends rain and hail,
Hail of cold hearts beat me down,
the tear drops rained, fate me to drown.

Above the trees, a light will shine,
through the leaves, from time to time,
and from that light, there lies a bloom,
that grows each day, from sun to moon

As long as the mist of knowledge shrouds,
of the sun, behind those clouds,
I'll wait again for light to shine,
Upon the fields, from time to time.

~ by: Matt.J.T~

Feel free to comment. liven up the silence here with a bit of opinion. :)

~Dreamwalker~